Flash Fiction on the Spot - Prompt #2
- tinadebellegarde
- Jul 10, 2021
- 1 min read
Updated: Oct 23, 2025
Here is a photo prompt from my Instagram feed @tdb_writes I intend to write a 100 word flash to this prompt. Check back for my finished story. Feel free to comment. Or write your own and post here or include a link here so we can read it.

Here is my response to the above prompt.
A Swift Escape
He scrambles from the room, his father chasing him clumsily with the belt. The boy flies down the stairs, his feet barely touching a step.
He grasps the newel post to swing himself out the door the way a discus thrower winds up and lets loose.
He spots the faded horse and jumps in the saddle. With a swift kick the plastic horse rears his head, steam escaping his nostrils.
The horse pries himself from the tangle, the squeaky springs popping from the strain. His legs wobbly, he takes off with his rider across the lawn and into the sunset.


I love the way you are able to establish a grim reality while immediately subverting it in so few words! The mix of childlike wonder as means of escape is captivating and insightful!
Thank you, Mally. I love this photo, too! And once I looked at it as a writing prompt, I saw a completely different photo.
I love the photo and your flash fiction response!